Monday, April 26, 2010

Robbed

Here the dusk began
And by the time I reached there
The curtains of the houses were already drawn
The night had fallen
We were strangers sitting outside this quiet town

We crept in on cat feet
Soft, quiet
As to not wake up all the gentle ladies
In their dreams of men and food and a life disastrous with dramatics

We called for our accomplices softly
They crept out from the corners
Stolen gold glittered in their hands
And the glittering light shone brightly in our eyes

It’s done, someone spoke, let’s go
No, I said
What? They asked
They’ll come after us, they’ll know
So what do you want to do? Kill the whole village?
Yes, I said.

The light of blood shone in my eyes.

5 comments:

  1. Wow crazy blog dude, its really good! I want to know the story behind it... The main character seems quite bloodthirsty lol. This is the first time I have seen you gravitate towards story telling on your blog, and I think you would be really good at it too. When's your story coming?

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  2. :D i'll have to make up a story behind it Lol or you could. its fun it being all mysterious.. my story requires my attention - this summer man, so we hope.

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  3. somethings wrong with this comments thing. :P

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  4. HOLY SHIT THIS IS FREAKING AWESOME.
    O
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    I LOVE IT.
    I LOVE YOUR PSYCHO! <3. You are becoming more like me everyday, and I L-O-V-E iT.

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