Friday, June 5, 2009

Glory Song of Ursula

Sink in
and resurface
the voice
that is yours is mine now

lift up
the smiling face
the grace
that is yours is mine now

turn out
the heated crowd
the call
that is yours is mine now

and you
your wide eyes
the senses
that are yours are mine now

2 comments:

  1. there's something really weird about this poem,

    I feel like I should read it backwards, like read the last line first.
    I don't know what it is, but I really like it.

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  2. I like it the way it is... the last line is the most powerful... the senses that are yours are mine now... although the first is also very powerful ... this poem could be a bit scary lol but if I was the 'you' in the poem and you were the 'me' then I wouldn't mind at all :)

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